submission notes paper 2

As I was writing my paper I thought about what people would like to know. So I wrote about things that I thought were important to me and would be good to my readers. I tried to put as much details and content that I could in my paper. I tried to put qutoes whwere they needed to be and all of the other punctuation that I needed and when it was time for peer review I asked for the reviewer to give me help to make my paper sound good and to flow properly.

I took my peer reviewers Advice and did the revisions that I needed for my paper. I did not choose any specific style I just wrote what was in my heart and what I was feeling and thinking about at the time. My whole messages to my paper is to never give up on yourself no matter what you go through because you always have other options. I can say that I owe a lot of what I wrote in my paper to my grandmother she agve me a lot of encouragement.

I basically tried to stay focus on my subject and not run all over the place.