submission notes for paper 3

To: Nicole Hancock
From: Anita Glen
Date: November 12, 2008
Subject: Paper 3

I did a paper on “Raising boys vs. Girls and I wrote a lot about my personal experience because they both are different in gender and the way they feel both emotional and physically. I explain how each one of my kinds is different in way the deal with their peers and with society. My kids don’t follow the status quo like the other does. I even look up some cites that would help me to support what I was trying to established to my readers.

I got a lot of feedback from the sites I went to and also from my peer reviewer. I tried to make the voices of my paper sound like a person who is experiment the difference of different gender children and I also tried to make it flow in the correct way so it want sound so bland. I tried to also state how each kid is different without the paper being boring.

Overall I tried to stay focus on my topic and tried not to have so many punctuation errors and not to run all over the place with my ideals.