gender argument prewriting

I feel that raising boys vs girls are pretty hard because you are dealing with two different types of people. Many missed feeling and emotions. With boys you have to be considerate on the fact that the are going to rough,tough, stubborn and hot headed. Boys have the tendency to want to be the man of the house if there is not a father figure around. They are sometime neater than girsl and it really do not take a lot to please them either. With girl you have a lot of emotions that comes along with them and a lot of those center around them trying to fit in with girls of their peer group that take a lot of TLC because they are sterotype to look and be a certain way. Girls have the tendency to always want the affection of other.

Green Exercise

He tell who Merle Haggard was and where he came from by telling us that he was an outsider and a ex-con and that all the songs he sung were about booze and prison.

What I learned from conference?

I learn the following things from conference and that is what I need in my paper to make it flow and sound good to my readers. I also learned that I can add as much detail to my paper that I want as long as it flow with the rest of the paper. I also found out where I am in the class and what I need to do to get to the top of the class.

Teacher Notes

I would like to know from the professor is this. If my writing is on the right track. What things do I need to do with this paper or at this point to make the other paper I have to do seem more understandable and with less mistakes.

Freewriting: Identity Audience

Who Is my reader?
My reader is adults round my age and women that are in my shoes. Who are doing things on there own.

What do they already know?
They don't know to much if you are not one who like to share things. Are they problem know more about the topics than you do alredy.

What do they need to know?
The things they have to know are things that make you who you are and the things that make you different in a unique way.

What will get my audience interested/intrigued?
I think that the most that would interest them is how I relate to things and how is that I can understand what it is that make feel the way I do about certain subjects.

The outline of my paper would include a intro on what identity is to me and how i feel about it. How do we get our own identity where exactly does it comes from. Then I would give example of what I feel and the things I learned that has got me to where i am now in life. Those things would be past experiences I have had with life and etc.

Working Thesis

I think that your parents kind of shape your identity of you. Because they help you to be the person you turn out to be as and adult.