Submission notes for paper 4

To: Nicole Hancock
From: Anita Glen
Date: December 5, 2008
Subject: Paper 4 (Group Paper)

My assignment for this paper was to watch the movie Rock Star and compare it to the group in the movie named Steel Dragon to the real life group Judas Priest. My group and I stayed in constant contact with each other through e-mail and during class to make sure we each new what the other was doing. What I did to help with my part of the paper was to research the internet about the group Judas Priest. I read the information I got from the internet and compared that to how the movie portrayed the group back then when they had the departing of a group members and the confrontation that involved the group overall.

I took what I read from the internet and what I saw from the two and put them together to help my group come with a paper. I had to come compare the two group and give the reason what made them different from what the movie portrayed.

seminar 2

The points that were brought up in seminar was that everyone had their own opinion about how the songs had there own identity. I liked how each song had a specific style to it and everyone seemed to pull those things out in the seminar setting. I learn a lot about how to identify certain thing that are being talked about in a song.

Addition blog 5

This semester I took Professor Nicole Hancock because I had as my writing teacher before. I can honestly say I like her way of trying to get us how to understand how writiing really suppose to be. I still make a lot of mistakes on my papers but it not because I'm not getting what she is saying it is just that I have a difficult expression on paper and gather thoughts to put in my papers. I can say that it has gotten better and that I will continue this processing as long as I have to until it is great.

4th paper comments

In the movie the Rock Star At first I was a bit confused about who the band was until I went and looked them up on the internet and read about them. I found them to be a very interesting group. I did appreicaite some of their music. I also understood what the purpose of the movie was about.

Now me and my group or going to put together a paper on how we felt about the grouping the movie and compare to the real Judas Priest.

Additional blog 4

I never liked writing but I can say the teachers I have had has changed that. They have taught me that if you have things to say then its best to write them down and give good examples of how it makes you feel or exactly how things happened. In writing papers there is a lot of techniques with it and you have listen to what the teacher is telling you to do so you can write good papers with less mistakes and information.

answeres to the research question

1-2. Kids are just different in so many ways because the are so different in how they act and do things. I guess that's the reason boys and girls are so different boys on the other hand are agressive, stubborn and just have a hard time at learning things. Girls on the other hand just do want they need to do so that they can be sucessful. They have a way of just wanted to be successful. I am raising both genders and I honest see how the statics came up with their theories.



3. I think that having both parents in the house is good sometime because you have to people who are concern about what the kids are and must do to be successful. Being a single is hard because you have to be both parents and that can be a lot of stress on that one person.



4. Some of the single dads I know are doing a good a though it is hard for them they seem to manage pretty well.

recieving feedback on my papers additional blog 2

When we have peer review in class I like to ask my classmates to give me as much help as they can so that I can make my paper have lets of good details and how to make the paper flow really well. Make sure I have enough details in the paper to state my point and to give them an ideal of the paper